When it comes to making a first impression on a new reader, the title comes second only to the cover art in making an impact. That’s why selecting a title should never come lightly. But what a huge challenge! To capture the essence of an entire story in less than 5 words (usually).
I’m currently writing Book 3 in my Texas Ever After series – 19th century western fairy tale retellings. The first, Fairest of Heart, reimagines the story of Snow White. Book 2, If The Boot Fits, releases in March and is a twist on the classic Cinderella story. Book 3 takes a slightly different approach and mashes up two fairy tales into the same story – Little Red Riding Hood and Sleeping Beauty.
A woman in a red cape, raised in isolation by a doting grandmother. A pet wolf raised from a pup. A birthday that brings her out of hiding yet threatens her life. A dashing hero named Philip who rides a white horse sent to escort her safely to the home she left behind. And a villainous dragon plotting to destroy them both. As with the previous two books in this series, the plot will be original, but it will pay homage to the fairy tales that lent their inspiration, and there will be many subtle nods for readers to discover and enjoy.
Because this story is a road trip romance, I really fell in love with my working title of Riding with Miss Hood. It seemed so perfect for the journey-centered plot and a cute play on words with Riding Hood. However, as often happens, my publishing team decided that it didn’t quite create the best first impression. They wanted a title that would have a more romantic feel as well as something that brought to mind not only Little Red Riding Hood, but Sleeping Beauty as well.
So here it is. The official title of Book 3 . . .
Cloaked in Beauty
I have to admit that the title is really growing on me. I can’t wait to see the cover they come up with. I imagine it will be quite dramatic.
What do you think of my new title?
When you are unfamiliar with an author, are there certain titles that draw you in or turn you off?
Whenever I see a title with a pun, clever turn of phrase, or something humorous worked into the title, I’m immediately intrigued. Since I love books with humor, seeing that reflected in the title or cover really draws me in.
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Clever title! Love it!
Thanks, Cindy! 🙂
I think the title captures both fairy tales very well. Creative and memorable. They did a great job!
I agree. I’m so thankful to have a team to help me with things like this.
I think that title sounds like a great combination of the two fairytales! I love the first two as well. And the covers! Can’t wait to see the cover for this one!
Me, too, Deb. I’m sure there will be a dramatic splash of red.
I like the new title. You say it is a mashed up story and the title now gives a nod to both of the storied ‘mashed together’. Every book is such a pleasure to read, I can hardly stand the wait.
Thank you so much, Susan. This series has been so fun to write.
I like the title and agree with those who say it captures both tales well. Excited to see the cover. When does this one release?
This one won’t come out until December 2024. The red cloak might make a festive splash even though it is not a Christmas story.
The title of your third book “Cloaked in Beauty” actually firs better with the first two titles and I like the subtlety.
I think you’re right, Lauraine. I’m glad to have the help of an experienced publishing team!
Yay! And what a fun mash-up! Can’t wait!
Thanks, D’Ann! 🙂
I personally loved the title, Riding with Miss Hood. However, I guess you did need to get Beauty in there somewhere. Either way, I love this series and the whole idea of it. Thank you for writing it!!
Thank YOU for reading it, Rebecca. 🙂
Fairest of Heart totally captured me and I can’t wait for the next two. Hurry up!!
Thanks, Robin. 🙂 I’m scribbling as fast as I can. Ha!
Thanks for the title reveal with us! Best wishes as you write the 3rd novel.
Look forward to reading the new and 2nd installment when it’s released. 🙂
Thanks, Elisa. It’s fun to see the book process come together outside of the writing piece. So many aspects have to come together. Next is the cover. Yay!
I like both titles. Can’t wait to read them. A clever title will often draw me in. 🙂
Me, too, Gena. I love clever titles.
I like your new title & can’t wait for the book to be available for preorder!
I’d say the cover pic influences me more than the title of a book, but at the same time, if a title is too long or too snarky or too boring, I may not buy the book. The old saying goes to never judge a book by its cover, but I’ve found that many times, you really can judge a book by its cover. A really good author puts a lot of thought into the title & the cover pic (like you do!!) & it shows! 🙂
I agree, Lori. I’ve been turned off by long or dull titles or poor cover art. We only have one chance to make a positive first impression on potential readers. It’s hard work, but so worth it to get the packaging just right.
I’ll let you in on a little secret…
The cover of “If the Boot Fits” is my favorite cover ever! It’s very eye-catching, I love the color of the dress, & I really like the font you used for the title.
Just wanted you to know that the efforts you put into getting “the packaging just right” are truly worth it. 🙂
Have a blessed day!
Thank you so much! I have to admit that I had very little to do with this one. The Art Department at Bethany House gets all the props. 🙂
Well, it’s still your book & it’s beautiful, so it is a nice reflection on you anyway. 🙂